Review of "Yellow Eyes," short story by Sayuri Yamada
Review: **May contain spoilers** This story is... odd. Since there's no summary provided I will briefly recap. It's from the viewpoint of a man suffering from depression. His son died and the death caused him and his wife to drift apart. Most of the story takes place during what appears to be some sort of party/convention for people with unusual eyes. So the story switched back and forth between him talking to people at the party and flashbacks of the past. It's odd for several reasons. The first is the author's choice of second person tense. Instead of saying "he did this" or "he did that" it was "you did this" or "you did that." Personally, I found this made the story harder to get into. Instead of the story coming across as me getting to know the characters as I would a friend it was it became "psychological." The end result was that I felt more detached from the story than I probably would have ha...